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Post by erin on Jan 30, 2006 20:10:25 GMT -5
Like the first gleam of dawn I see your face I feel Your grace and You set the pace For me to live and run the race You broke the pride that brought me disgrace thorgh that you helped me escape from this place With humility and peace I now live free Like the first gleam of dawn I see your face
I havent written in a while I hope you like it
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Post by uncertainrocker on Jan 30, 2006 20:14:51 GMT -5
thnx. free? kidding i thought it was good.
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Post by erin on Jan 30, 2006 20:29:42 GMT -5
I know that was the only part that didnt rhym my poems dont normally rhyme like this so I thought I'd try it
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Post by randomgirl14 on Feb 2, 2006 12:37:21 GMT -5
Dang ur good.lol
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Post by uncertainrocker on Feb 3, 2006 21:00:05 GMT -5
haha
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Post by randomgirl14 on Feb 4, 2006 7:57:17 GMT -5
what you laughin at???lol
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Post by uncertainrocker on Feb 4, 2006 10:51:16 GMT -5
idk... haha
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Post by Ben Nash on Feb 5, 2006 21:20:28 GMT -5
that was nice!!
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Post by randomgirl14 on Feb 6, 2006 9:17:10 GMT -5
lol!!
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Post by uncertainrocker on Feb 6, 2006 21:10:57 GMT -5
haha
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Post by randomgirl14 on Feb 7, 2006 10:40:32 GMT -5
hehe
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Post by uncertainrocker on Feb 8, 2006 15:32:32 GMT -5
r we just goin to keep laughing at this?
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Post by randomgirl14 on Feb 9, 2006 15:58:24 GMT -5
I don't know.lol
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Post by Ben Nash on Feb 10, 2006 14:44:09 GMT -5
he ha he ha he ha he ha he ha...
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Post by randomgirl14 on Feb 10, 2006 16:10:09 GMT -5
You sound like a donkey.lol
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