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Post by erin on Jan 2, 2006 15:10:57 GMT -5
ok heres one i wrote a few months ago i dont know how great it is but my friend says its really powerful (shes just being nice)
What is love but a complicated truth? A debt paid, a song sung What is love but a secret between friends? a walk in the park on a starry night What is love but forgiveness? A prayer prayed, a verse read What love but life? Every breath breathed, every step taken together What is love but real? A passion inside and its light that shines through What is love but knowing He died because He loved you? So you tell me what is love?
whatcha think?
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Post by Ben Nash on Jan 2, 2006 17:48:55 GMT -5
that is really good! and it really is powerful!
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Post by erin on Jan 2, 2006 18:13:08 GMT -5
thank you
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Post by uncertainrocker on Jan 3, 2006 10:56:22 GMT -5
nice it is pretty powerful
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Post by erin on Jan 3, 2006 13:33:52 GMT -5
thanks
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Post by Ben Nash on Jan 3, 2006 14:34:45 GMT -5
no problem...
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